
In Bike vs Car, The Bike Sometimes Wins
Comment: In your post, you first point out that when bikes and cars normally collide, bikes are generally the ones considered to be at fault, and cars can get away without any major losses. In the case of your article, however, the cyclists prevail. The post regales a story in which a woman was driving illegally through
Your blog post did not really offer too much of a comment on this situation, although the tone in which it was reported seemed sufficient enough in this case to summarize your position. The second incident your post touches on reads like good justice on the road. I am particularly glad the driver was ticketed by bike cops. I decided to the post it since it seemed to be a good introductory article to show the context for the second post I found. I was very happy to come across it since it was a fine example of cyclist’s standing up for themselves to an irrationally upset driver and teaching the driver a lesson. Both posts could really help non-bikers to consider and appreciate the unfair circumstances imposed on bikers and the ways that bikers fight back to assert their equality.
Don’t Tread on Me: Building a Nation of Cyclists
Comment: I must commend you; Bike Snob NYC is always a great site to read, but this post is particular managed to be informative and still maintain a sense of humor. I definitely have found this to be true that biking permeates many communities and makes all of part of this cycling “nation” you refer to. The parallel you draw between bikers and Americans as baby nations really works well for the purposes of your blog post. I was laughing all the way through your article, simply because I completely agreed with it, but am able to recognize that any non-biker would find it utterly ridiculous. This does not stop me from agreeing with you on all counts. I would have liked to read your description of what exactly Cyclist’s Day would entail. Maybe nobody is allowed to use a car for the day, which would be difficult. Or perhaps people should be encouraged to find time to ride a bike at some point during the day. We could have bike parades! However the technicalities of the holiday work out, I see your point, that having a holiday makes a group nationally recognized. In terms of our own homeland, I think we may already be closer to this than you suggest here. I think the likely choice would be somewhere overseas where a vast numbers of the population ride bikes daily, but even here in Los Angeles we have a designated bicycle district on a block that was not taken that cyclists have somewhat hijacked.
I appreciated that you balanced out your post and prevented it from turning into a whiny rant, by also cataloging the progress cyclists have made so far because the things that we already have are what make the cycling community what it is right now. The industry is huge. Last week I wrote a post about hipsters and cyclists, differences, and referenced much of the garb people buy to distinguish themselves as bikers. Let me just say thank you. Thank you for comparing Sheldon Brown to Ben Franklin. That was perfect and made my day. I think it makes it much more sense to fight for out rights in this way, to celebrate what we have, than to allow ourselves to get upset by every car we see.


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You picked two different articles that are clearly linked, yet of vastly different tone. I like this idea, because I'm used to just seeing a pro- and anti- reflection when reading blogger responses to two different posts. That was a good idea.
I would have liked, however, to have seen more links in your pre-response post. Your only links were the two blogs that you had addressed. As a suggestion, you could develop your introduction further by explaining the situation, rather than jumping right into the responses that you wrote. That way, you'd have more to link to, and the reader would feel like they understand where you're coming from in regards to your post responses. Oh, and just because i'm a fan of the HBO show, the author was comparing cyclists to the New Englanders, not the English. A minor distinction, but one that may confuse your reader.
Also, In your first response, you reiterated the poster's story about the chinese biker's vengeance. i would say that, since the poster had already written an extensive blog on it, there isn't much reason to recap it in your response. I understand that you wanted to explain it to your readers, so you put it in, but maybe it would be better if you put it in your introductory paragraphs instead. That said, I did like your reasoning as far as celebrating the biker's assertion of rights but attacking the massive riot that broke out afterwards. Honestly, i don't really have any suggestions about your second post - It was a solid response to the post. It was written rather conversationally, however, so if you are going for a more professional style, I would suggest you address different parts of the post. Then again, the post was just a big satire, so maybe there really is no point in trying to address it critically.
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